I'm sure there's something interesting in here, but the god awful grammar makes it such a chore to read. How is it possible that Dave could write the Observer for all this time and yet be such an incredibly shitty writer?
He doesn't have to improve - no one's on his ass to make him improve, he's his own boss. He could've probably learned something had he been paying attention during the time when he wrote for The National Sports Daily, 'cause they probably had some pretty good copy editors putting his stuff through a wringer.
I've been working at the same newspaper for 13 years now, and we have one writer who was there when I got there who hasn't improved not one single, solitary whit since I got there 13 years ago. How do you do something for 13 years and not get better at it? She makes the same stupid mistakes now that she made way back when. All she has to do is keep a copy of her unedited stuff, then compare it to the edited version, then work on those weaknesses. But why should she? No one in management is making her, no one cares. It's more work for the editors, but screw us, who cares about us?
That is insane and depressing. See, in my mind, being a professional writer means having the ability to write at something about an 8th grade level. Silly me.
You'd be surprised at how many reporters/journalists by trade are actually poor writers. If most of them tried to publish the amount of content Dave does on a weekly basis, I imagine there would be lots of errors too.
I'm not saying he's great but he's obviously prioritized the quality of his journalism over the quality of his grammar.
From comments that he's made throughout the years, Meltzer's process seems to be compiling odds and ends throughout the week and doing the bulk of his newsletter writing during a single night. Thus, his writing, most likely, does not go through a second pass. When he spends time on a piece, it's obvious. Just look at his LA Times articles or a few of the obituaries published in those two collections (I recall that the Owen Hart and Giant Baba ones stood out). He is not a bad writer.